Thursday, July 19, 2007

Thinking Comments

Rating: 5.0

I think daily what I have to do to achieve happiness,
I wonder why, why it has to be like this.
I think of how things get so confusing,
I go to my quiet place, and begin musing.
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Eric Pennington
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Marvin Brato 19 July 2007

You have made your point well, but have you consider listening to what she may be thinking too. Good piece Eric, worth 10.

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