Thinking With Fun Comments

A beautiful poem and very nicely crafted. Thanks very much for sharing.

Loved the way the poem is presented, how the content of the poem juxtaposing against the caption, the metaphors used, the rhyming pattern…the choice of words, phrases and images chosen to augment the mood of the poem. Enjoyed. Top score and Myfav

Part 4. And your wish is limited too " Could I be a bird That trills without fear Of the hunter." You do not nurture a wish to soar in the skies against the winds on your new-found wings..

Part 3: So cowered down by doubts. Though life has given you wings, you dare not using them. (Contd)

Part 2. The caption says, ‘Thinking With Fun', but the poem does not speak of fun. It is about harsh realities and blindfolded life throwing trash at you. " Why do I feel tied in a rope With no will to untie the knots " (Contd)

Hi Nosheen, Delighted to see you here again. After, May be eons! And about this marvellous poem…