Tuesday, October 20, 2015

Thinking To Myself Comments

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The leaves are falling on the lawn
As I glance around at break of dawn
The colours are full of autumn gold
With greens and browns, I feel old
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Mai Murphy Venn
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Hazel Durham 13 May 2016

Great rhyming and a beautiful write, with the seasons captured with clarity and individuality of the uniqueness of their precious gifts of nature changing with spirit and eternal zest!

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Ming Murphy 20 October 2015

Lovely descriptive poem full of imagery

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