Wednesday, November 22, 2006

Thinking Of You Makes Me Smile Comments

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Thinking of you always makes me smile.
Even though you wronged me I cant stop thinking about you.
Everywhere I turn I see your face,
I think its haunting me.
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Brandi Knecht
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Brian Dorn 29 January 2007

Brandi, I like the frustration in the final line... it sums up the poem nicely. Well done and very real to life! Brian

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