Thinking Of You Comments

I really liked the first several stanzas. The rhyme and repetition were deceptively simple, as the poem progressed I realized it was not just a sing-songy thing your were writing, not a greeting card, but something about a complex, painful situation. I found that worthy of a poem. The last couple stanzas didn't have quite the impact for me, though I'm not sure what to suggest, to strengthen them.

very nice poem...well written....sorry to hear if these words are true....that anybody would raise their hand to you. this i will never understand...to raise a hand in anger to a woman from a man. Brian