Friday, September 26, 2014

Thinking Of You Comments

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If thinking of you brings you to me,
You would always be with me.

If only I could manifest you in flesh, I would.
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Holly Moon
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Chinedu Dike 28 September 2014

Your use of IF and SIMILE in the poem brought out the essence of the piece. You captured the feeling of love right there in the inner recesses of your heart. A lovely and well articulated poem. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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