Thinking Of The Old Farmhouse Comments
I want to wake up with the rain falling on a tin roof.
I want to wake up next to you lying softly by my shoulder.
Then, while listening to the soft metal’s gently ringing,
I would gently wake you with a shower of kisses
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Very lovely poem Sandra. I too love the sound the rain makes. Sincerely, Mary
Excellent, Chiffon Shakespeare (remember your name?) . I would personally substitute a few other words for the frequent use of soft and especially for soft metal of the roof. How about pewter metal or similar? Best H
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8/6/2025 11:57:52 PM # 1.0.0
Yes, a round of applause, your back! Writing your best little jewels still! Theo