Monday, January 20, 2003
Thinking In Bed Comments
Rating: ★4.4
I'm thinking in bed,
Cause I can't get out
Till I learn how to think
What I'm thinking about;
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Dennis Lee
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Timothy Werner
17 November 2004
Wouldnt it have been great to be snoopy though, I like it, nice tempo.
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8/2/2025 1:26:37 PM # 1.0.0
Of course; the big, big problem here is the last verse. It would really improve the whole thing if you just took it out completely a put something else in it's place. I'm sure, whatever it was you put in ; would improve it. The other verses, by the way, were excellant.