I've been thinking about you
More as each season passes
I've been so cold and so blue
As my heart shatters like glasses.
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Theo good day. Really beautiful sentiment here. For my taste it could flow smoother through the rhyme, maybe even no rhyme and pure prose instead. Otherwise it's really nice. I've been coming through a situation that sticks the same chord. Your words painfully take me back. Hard to read because of that. Which says of the power of this great poem. Keep writing, and move on from her...
Another nice poetry from you, the way you pull the idea was amazing, it sounds like a simple catchy movie though_Unwritten Soul
what a beautiful romantic poem))))) . it is like a sunlight in the morning))))) it takes my heart))) wonderful work
a good work again from my friend. that is so romantic. i like it Theo.
a good work again from my friend. that is so romantic. i like it Theo.
I can relate to this one so easily. One of my favorites of yours.