Sunday, July 22, 2012

Thinking About You Comments

Rating: 5.0

I've been thinking about you
More as each season passes
I've been so cold and so blue
As my heart shatters like glasses.
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Theo Williams
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Alex Medina 03 August 2012

I can relate to this one so easily. One of my favorites of yours.

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Rick Elpers 29 July 2012

Theo good day. Really beautiful sentiment here. For my taste it could flow smoother through the rhyme, maybe even no rhyme and pure prose instead. Otherwise it's really nice. I've been coming through a situation that sticks the same chord. Your words painfully take me back. Hard to read because of that. Which says of the power of this great poem. Keep writing, and move on from her...

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Unwritten Soul 26 July 2012

Another nice poetry from you, the way you pull the idea was amazing, it sounds like a simple catchy movie though_Unwritten Soul

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 24 July 2012

what a beautiful romantic poem))))) . it is like a sunlight in the morning))))) it takes my heart))) wonderful work

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 23 July 2012

a good work again from my friend. that is so romantic. i like it Theo.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 23 July 2012

a good work again from my friend. that is so romantic. i like it Theo.

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Valerie Dohren 22 July 2012

Very poignant and emotive write.

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