Thursday, November 15, 2012

Thinking A Parachute Upwards Comments

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Unable to fall down
I'm thinking twenty four seven
So much that it's burning upon
The air I'm falling in
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Anthony Han
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Scarlett Outlaw 16 November 2012

This is a really deep poem, you should be proud! :)

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Anthony Han 16 November 2012

I had some difficulty getting it to work out, I will keep at it: D!

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John Brown 16 November 2012

This is the type of poem that needs reading and re-reading I feel. I can't say I fully understand it, but I'm trying.

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Anthony Han

Anthony Han

Monterey Park. Raised in H.H.
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