Friday, February 10, 2006

Thinking Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tottering on the edge of oblivion
A cliff over a pool of infinite thought
To jump would be to embrace it
The possibility of infinity
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Warren Augustus de Guzman
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Michael Fischer 30 March 2007

Excellent poem here! 'A cliff over a pool of infinite thought' was my favorite line in the poem. Well done! You earned a ten on this! -Michael

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Herbert Nehrlich1 11 February 2006

The first word was a surprise. Is it teetering? Great poem though. Best wishes Herbert

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