Think Twice My Friend Comments

You got me thinking there until the very end. I thought do they have computers in prison. Oh, then you told us, you’re the one with the key. I had to read it twice. It’s an excellent poem, meaningful too. 10 from me, well written

Dee, I am not sure how I missed this before, but, I like the fact that you at least try to do something about it before you have to tell them that! B.V.A.

I wonder how many prisoners ever became geologists while they hammer in the quarry doing hard labour?

Thank you for recommending this one, Dee, it was well worth the read. I have some additional comments to make which I will mail you with. Love, Fran xx

Dee, excellent write... maybe you've converted a few potential criminals? Well done! ! Brian

I've never been in jail and that's one place I hope to never go! Great poem. Sincerely, mary

NICE TRIBUTAL PIECE...HAD A FRIEND WHO WAS A CAPTAIN AT A MAX-SECURITY IN N.Y., WHATTA' CIRCUS OF MOROSE...A (10) 4 TH' GUARDS! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

Very strong narrative, you hold the key to some changing theirs minds I hope, a great write Love duncan

Ha! Good twist at the end of the story. -chuck