Think-Tank! Sink-Sank! A Lonely Pink Rose Shrinks In The Only Garden! Comments

A wonderful piece of poetry! Fascinating expression...eexcellent choice of diction! Each stanza sparkles like a precious stone...loved reading this beautiful poem....Top score!

A one of a kind write on loneliness. Sometimes loneliness could fuel our mind and heart to write a wonderful poem. Liked the penultimate stanza. Beautifully crafted.

spontaneity is the weapon you have marveled in your loneliness...........studded with fun! ! to share you eager is a genre of your fervor may be time is to deliver a shoulder for you to lie on; its not difficult to curl on pros its struggling on crons its thick in pink discloses in wink its a sapphire under dawns to pluck its worthwhile to wait while walking miles! !

i very powerful poetry...rich language..the poet has good command in the language i like the tittle too....nice use of alliteration...i like it...top..marks

Good one, my friend! One of my favorites on the site so far.

Sweet and sour alliteration of words..saucy write about einsamkeit or loneliness with strawberries, cherries and wine alone sitting and hoping a to join the parallel sides of love in a square..alas it never happens though the feelings add glamour to sham life imploring to be lovelorn.

'I’m sitting with empty ache and I'm a fruitcake in the lonely land! I’m a blue star in the night sky; lonely car in the lonely street. I’m in the darkness – in rivers of blood and fears; is it a lonely treat? ' Your lines fill the imagination, truly a very beautiful poem. :)

The words are like something easy to you, you pick and create just like that...so easy in your hand :) you have good hand to paste them all in right place hahahaha...The theme still about loneliness and i am not really sure at this state if there's hidden story other than loneliness theme...but i see you have good mind, a joyful person with hahahaha..that's nice may one day you will write i am happy and very..hahaha...I laugh when your best friend Vipins sing you a song called lonely :) by the way i like this line.. I’m a blue star in the night sky; lonely car in the lonely street. awesome line... :) _Unwritten Soul

my dear friend, you are a perfect poet. you have read my so many poems and commented also and i am pleased to read your comments too. though i have been composing poems since my childhood. but off and on i stopped it. i composed the hymn of mercy just on the night when talibans had broken the idol of Lord Budhha. then i stopped. recently i have started and i can say about myself that i am choosing pebbles on the sea shore of poetry. with best wishes.

Harry, can you imagine the joy when you are lonely no more? Can you imagine happiness like never known before? Reach out and touch somebody's heart, jump in and upset the apple cart. Smile although it's fake. Life and love is it what we make. Brilliant poem! Always...

Lonely I'm Mr.Lonely I have nobody For my own I'm so loney I have nobody For my own(I remember these line now) I'm a blue star in the sky(I like this line) Dear poet, I think, you are the one who well known of loneliness....Great deal of thanks for sharing this poem! ! ! ! 10**********stars! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !