Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, May 10, 2014

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My words were heard
As I slowly whispered
They were in air with intense touch
The melody was so sweet as such
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Like it 1 hour ago by ??? REVIV?? ??? to Think of pure love

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very good very nicely written EP HaridasanLess than a minute ago I love these lines. Comment 0

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good Carrissa Whateley2 minutes ago Very passionate

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Wise words Bharat RaghavanLess than a minute ago a nice play on words, seasoned guess the structure meant last line needed formatting...good read

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Nice poem Azhar Sabri1 minute ago very good

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My words were heard As I slowly whispered

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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