Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Monday, September 30, 2013

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 September 2013

· · Unfollow Post · Share · Promote Harkaran Singh Bajwa likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 September 2013

Summary of your poem David Baety2 minutes ago Great work. It is filled with imagery and rhythm. Very attractive! Comment +1 nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 September 2013

Demetrio Najera2 minutes ago you have talent bro dont doubt yourself :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 September 2013

A good poem Tim MurrayLess than a minute ago Tolerance is a wonderful topic to write about. The message is clear and simple. The poem reads well. A minor typo, I think. The first line of the fifth stanza reads I was a soldier and PACE loving... Did you mean peace? Good poem. I hope to read more in the future. Comment +1 I LIKE IT

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 September 2013

Pat Butler2 minutes ago GOOD FLOW

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 September 2013

I love to write more Especially poems and prayers

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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