Think Of Me As Dead (Tomad) ........[communication; Aging; Humor; Sort Of Long] Comments

BTW, eagle is my favourite BIRD.

Your grievance and your sorrow merged beautifully as your poem reached its zenith. I enjoyed the cadence and verse. Excellent job. FULL STARS

Para 2 line three, nice you clarified else readers will go to take a bath before reading full poem.

Line 3 I feel instead of 'soon' how about 'promptly' you want them to rush in thinking right.

Bri) line 2 seems bumby for me with two stops (full stops) I think you got carried away by emotions. AH.....

I've just reread the poem. Since writing it, I've seen a 'grown' Golden Eagle fly up from along a northern California highway on which my 'mate' and I were traveling. ;) bri Ah, I see I've mentioned that below in 2017, . Cool! ! bri : )

ah, back again. And i'm still kicking. aka still alive. and this is STILL one of my favorite poems. Nice one, Bri. ;) bri

a year or so ago i saw Golden Eagle #3? , off the shoulder of CA route 101, i think eating from a deer carcass.

I voted high for dis epic limerick! U r a gr8 entertainer. As a birdlover i so enjoyd dis bird death will. I tink i wud enjoy being a dove when i die. And u r a bard whom no one can ignore if u write so fun n well.