Saturday, June 20, 2009

Think About It Sons Comments

Rating: 4.1

/////ESPECIALLY FOR FATHER, S DAY


A tale I heard
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 August 2009

Apart how I miss you How then can I kiss you Or even to hold you My arms to enfold you? But my God up above you He knows how I love you And safe he will keep you Till next I will meet you And then I will kiss you........son is always worrisome i the family and especially for father...really grat write.....10 read mine son...sun n son

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Surya . 24 June 2009

beautiful and nice ending voted10 surya

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Ashraful Musaddeq 20 June 2009

Marvelous and interesting 10+++

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Catrina Heart 20 June 2009

Such a beautiful composition written...heartfelt one woven with great rhymes and diction...10+++

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