Monday, November 25, 2013

Think About It Comments

Rating: 4.5

Think if all were healthy
and no one felt so unhappy.
Think if all were in perfect form
and no one else look malformed.
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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen
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Khairul Ahsan 15 December 2013

I have just read your poem. It's beautiful! Gave it 9/10. If darkness weren't there, we wouldn't have known light. Life has its ups and downs. Unless we see both, we are not complete.

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 03 December 2013

Thanks, Pradip, for taking time to respond and reading this.

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 03 December 2013

THanks, Lucifera Santez for your positive comment.

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Lucifera Santez 26 November 2013

realistic write. loved it. please read some of my work and comment. :)

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 25 November 2013

strongly penned truth!

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