Tuesday, September 18, 2012
Think About Comments
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Think about nothing
Life has for you something
Remembered any one that gives you peace
Two time square meals and life at ease
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
18 September 2012
Nice Cathy Pittillo2 minutes ago Great read.. keep writing
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8/17/2025 2:59:26 PM # 1.0.0
Connor Smith18 minutes ago There's no real thing in particular about this poem that is wrong per say, but at some points if feels to me like you were forcing the rhyme. It could also be your usage of eye rhymes, I'm not a huge fan of them but to each his own.