Things Will Fall Into Place Comments

this poem is very motivated and exquisite to its fullest

Very well-expressed, just live in the moment and grab it before it is gone; that way, everything seems within reach...

very intriguing and i like the part where it says if you are here be here. much of our pain is self chosen and one of the things that makes us mourn the present moment is trying to make comparison with the past and drifting away from the present by being elsewhere in the wings of the future. well done

the poem is really nice! We rarely live the moment, worrying about the future. liked these lines especially: I came back home quite late from the office, Took dinner and was lazing, looking at the ceiling. Ceiling! Where's it gone? It was there! . I see the sky of mind, With stars of the ideas twinkling bright.

i loved ur poem...even though it was more of a story it made my mind think and explore..

The presentation of a day's experience in the form of a poem is well done.

Simply excellent Poet. Your look has been transformed by the look of universe itself. You have again put the life to the so called static objects. We can feel the universal life-force everywhere as our Indian ancestors tried to establish through their philosophical ideas. Beautifully you have drawn a pictures of wholeness and at the same time your existence hangs on the hand of infinity. As a Poet your role is of a viewer. Not to make a comment but to narrate the whole thing of every happenings and what to be happen and what not. Actually I am very much knocked by this poem. Good illustration of own feelings when the sky of mind appears in the place of roof. POET LIVE LONG AND WRITE SO MANY BRIGHTEST PIECE OF CREATION. Regards 10+++ Apoet Bangla

very inspiring poem, and good imagination..... but this would have become a masterpiece if you had made it more rhythmic...... you imaginations and ideas are too good...... thank u for sharing this poem....

Really enjoyed ur poem.. Today morning I met the flower, The dog, the train, and tuned in to what all they said. They’re my friends, teachers, also the idea for the accolade! “When you work, just work, one at a time, with imagination The things will fall in place.”, they said. very nice indeed!

A common occurrence with all of us. We think of the future hurdles forgetting the opportunity in the present sometimes right in our face. Nice description and good personifications.

Simple things in life make everything fall in place, sadly we make things complicated thanks for the thoughts regards

descriptive and narrative...and a good message with in...thanks for the invite

Penchant philosophy of life skillfully penned. I enjoyed it. CP

Thank you for your poem. It helped me, especially today; my mind was everywhere but your poem set it straight.

I like the imaginary you used in this small long piece. Very creative. There's still people that thinks about nature and human kind together. I enjoyed reading it. Have a nice day. B.B.

When you sleep, just sleep I think this is the essence. And joy. The other is an illusion.

Very nice poem. Sometimes things do fall into place when we let them.

A really interesting poem, with such a important message. Thanks for sharing!

This is so very simple....but we humans normally fail in being simple........great message sir....thank you for your brilliance with words

i likes it (: this was a really good story! ! !