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true love..... true love come home to me.... this poem calls out its lover in a dream. good poem

Without doing all these things, I will jump the wall to reach....? ha! ha! ha! :) :) :)

Holymoly! holy-dooly! See this lovely poem of lovely Jacqui. I love these lines as I understood what sort of person you are... A splendid girl with simple heart. My heart is drifting, my mind is shifting to reach but where can I go.... ha! ha! 'Explore me, like I was the first... Do these things, and you'll find my soul. Do these things, and I'll jump the wall..' Anyways A rocking poem! But I am in India, How can do all these things for you... Ha! ha! ha! :) :) :) :) 10++++ + my breath. is it warm?

Exactly, this is what a human being wants... Some one who will do everything without thinking, expecting, bothering.... Lovely write :)

Lovely poem, well written.