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..........beautifully penned...wonder if this was an actual dream or only imagination.. ...anyway I love the imagery, we both can ride together, you ride the white spirit horse and I will ride the white unicorn...ha ha ★ As I ride on a white spirit horse that came down to take me home

grammaticism aside-regarding the below comment.. this is a powerful piece. A rush of emotion-truly heartfelt.

Great poem about a dream of the future. It was an enjoyable poem to read. a few errors-'their was no'-should be 'there was no' (which you used over & over) 'that live's'-should be 'that lives', 'did'nt'-should be 'didn't' & 'my tear's'-should be 'my tears'. ok Ravensong