Wednesday, September 12, 2012

Things To Be Balanced Comments

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Balance my heart between fast and slow beating rate,
Balance my wealth between the pauper and the rich state,
Balance my food between malnourished and overeating,
Balance my thought between weird and super serene.
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Valerie Dohren 13 September 2012

I believe that at the absolute point of balance polarization disappears and we find eternity. Good write.

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Eindaray Kyaw 13 September 2012

Just through your poem..i can see there are so many things that needs to be balanced but if all are in the same level..we will not be okay...anyhow..nice poem.. Great!

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Heather Wilson 12 September 2012

Life is all a balance, good one.nice write

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