Flotsam of the Twentieth Century:
One turntable, fair condition,
A set of speakers, midrange fine,
Woofer badly blown.
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I like it, Gary. The sense of nostalgia is appealing, and I've always liked the concept of what remains after we have moved along to the next Life Thing. Don
A list poem is only as good as its details, and I love many of these details. (I'd forgotten all about the word ratfink) . I don't think you need to repeat the title in the first line.