Saturday, September 20, 2014

Things Of Crumbs Comments

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Things of crumbs
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Things of crumbs asked
And even that little is not granted
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Salini Nair 22 September 2014

f you hold fast to hope No matter looks how small......................wise write

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Valsa George 21 September 2014

Even when we lose many things in life and are denied of the basic subsistence, Hope helps us from falling into the deep pit of despair! The poem concludes not as it began, but in a note of hope and optimism..... Enjoyed! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 September 2014

Things of crumbs pushing you down the bottom to no matter looks how small, this poem expresses hope of higher order. Nicely penned.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 September 2014

a poem of hope, things of crumbs with crumbic line If you hold fast to hope No matter looks how small I don't dare to say iambic well composed poem Deepak enlightening as Deepak 10

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