Tuesday, July 30, 2013

Things Of Beauty Comments

Rating: 5.0

Just some extra flesh, on a shapely mold,
Tips either fluffy, or like a chick's beak,
Catechu color or brownish, on wheatish gold,
Defying gravity, defiantly, so to speak!
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Khairul Ahsan
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Edward Kofi Louis 21 April 2018

Born Free! ! And to agree to the Natural Rules of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Khairul Ahsan 15 May 2018

Thanks for your reading and appreciation. Inspired.

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Khairul Ahsan 15 May 2018

@Edward Kofi Louis, read your poem titled 'Beautiful Sunshine'. It's a nice poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 20 October 2014

Natural beauty of a thing, person or place is the true beauty.

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Khairul Ahsan 15 May 2018

True, well said, @Akhtar Jawad Sahib. Thanks for your comment.

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Khairul Ahsan 05 November 2013

@Ivana Radan-jamnicki, Thanks for your comment. A poet's wandering thoughts, look for beauty!

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Linda Gentle 05 November 2013

Wistful and witty, Khairul! How do you manage to do that, and still not cross any limits of good taste? Wanna learn from you!

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Khairul Ahsan 30 August 2013

@Jesse Ellsbury, I am very pleased to see how you looked at my poem. I am truly inspired. They say, beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder. I say, eyes cannot ignore the beauty of things naturally beautiful, whoever is the beholder.

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Jesse Ellsbury 29 August 2013

Excellent poem with a very memorable opener. I love the verbs you use. Great job describing passion while still maintaining an innocent tone!

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Khairul Ahsan 23 August 2013

@ Heather Wilkins, Thanks for liking my poem and for your comment.

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Khairul Ahsan 23 August 2013

@ Saadat Tahir, Thanks a lot for your juicy comment.

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Geetha Jayakumar 23 August 2013

Wow. Beautiful poem. Beauty is found everywhere, only if we take a time to observe and enjoy it.. The poem is portrayed beautifully. Loved it.

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Khairul Ahsan 15 May 2018

Dear Geetha Jayakumar, I am glad that you liked this poem. Thanks for appreciating.

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Unwritten Soul 21 August 2013

Beauty is always can be found anywhere if you really observe the thing, it can be more profound if you carefully dig the artistry in every view...life a leaf, you can see how shape is so thinly cut, with the vein forming patterns...the colors can be different..even a stone is carved by the air sculptor...we conclude life is beautiful_Soul

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Khairul Ahsan 14 May 2018

Very artistic comment. Thank you, @Unwritten Soul!

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Heather Wilkins 09 August 2013

this poem is a thing of beauty. to see is to believe, to touch is to feel nice last stanza.

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Saadat Tahir 02 August 2013

lol..... lacy and racy kindles the imagination to combustion.... beautifully said...lovely words for a heavenly duo... :) blessings galore.... and may you write many more...

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Khairul Ahsan 01 August 2013

@Aria, thanks for the appreciation. Your 'plush wording' impressed me most.

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Aria Siren 01 August 2013

This poem is a thing of beauty. Gorgeous plush wording really captures the imagination of the reader and allows them to mold it as they wish. Lovely and abstract!

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Khairul Ahsan 01 August 2013

@ Lonnie, Thanks, and a relevant question, lol! 'A thing of beauty is a joy for ever'. As far as this joy goes, thoughts swarm into the head to provoke to say something. If there is nobody to listen, to write something, for the readers at large! Who knows, what next? I appreciate the question!

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Khairul Ahsan 01 August 2013

@ Adheez, Thanks for the comment.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 31 July 2013

good imagery for good poem thanks for sharing

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