Just some extra flesh, on a shapely mold,
Tips either fluffy, or like a chick's beak,
Catechu color or brownish, on wheatish gold,
Defying gravity, defiantly, so to speak!
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Natural beauty of a thing, person or place is the true beauty.
@Ivana Radan-jamnicki, Thanks for your comment. A poet's wandering thoughts, look for beauty!
Wistful and witty, Khairul! How do you manage to do that, and still not cross any limits of good taste? Wanna learn from you!
@Jesse Ellsbury, I am very pleased to see how you looked at my poem. I am truly inspired. They say, beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder. I say, eyes cannot ignore the beauty of things naturally beautiful, whoever is the beholder.
Excellent poem with a very memorable opener. I love the verbs you use. Great job describing passion while still maintaining an innocent tone!
@ Heather Wilkins, Thanks for liking my poem and for your comment.
Wow. Beautiful poem. Beauty is found everywhere, only if we take a time to observe and enjoy it.. The poem is portrayed beautifully. Loved it.
Dear Geetha Jayakumar, I am glad that you liked this poem. Thanks for appreciating.
Beauty is always can be found anywhere if you really observe the thing, it can be more profound if you carefully dig the artistry in every view...life a leaf, you can see how shape is so thinly cut, with the vein forming patterns...the colors can be different..even a stone is carved by the air sculptor...we conclude life is beautiful_Soul
this poem is a thing of beauty. to see is to believe, to touch is to feel nice last stanza.
lol..... lacy and racy kindles the imagination to combustion.... beautifully said...lovely words for a heavenly duo... :) blessings galore.... and may you write many more...
@Aria, thanks for the appreciation. Your 'plush wording' impressed me most.
This poem is a thing of beauty. Gorgeous plush wording really captures the imagination of the reader and allows them to mold it as they wish. Lovely and abstract!
@ Lonnie, Thanks, and a relevant question, lol! 'A thing of beauty is a joy for ever'. As far as this joy goes, thoughts swarm into the head to provoke to say something. If there is nobody to listen, to write something, for the readers at large! Who knows, what next? I appreciate the question!
Born Free! ! And to agree to the Natural Rules of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thanks for your reading and appreciation. Inspired.
@Edward Kofi Louis, read your poem titled 'Beautiful Sunshine'. It's a nice poem.