Monday, June 18, 2007

Things My Dead Mother Told Me Comments

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When I was so much younger then,
when I was just a child,
I remember the words my mother said
on the night my mother died,
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dead before I died
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Lorena Walker 24 June 2007

Beautiful and touching! Is this from real experience?

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Poornima Kanasen 22 June 2007

Hey ya, Very touching indeed..I liked the last line of yours especially, 'for your dreams bring you to me'...Well done! Words, sentenced appropriately! Nice one! With lots of best wishes and love, K.Poornima.....

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Tahnee ? ? ? 21 June 2007

awesome poem. very touching. i dont understand your name though, well i understand am just drawn to it 'dead before i died' i think thats awesome and i feel the same, keep up the writing.

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