Things Lost In The Fire Comments

Sleep seems so comforting Life's so depressing, Again, All once unstabilized Now so stabilized, well pair lines, thanks for sharing

Brilliant, Richard. I read this several times, and when I emphasized/interpreted the 'daytime' in the final stanza as a metaphor for hope I found the message particularly poignant.

Daytime transcends nighttime Dreams overcome nightmares All once unstabilized Now so stabilized - - - - -Yes, with hope and dream we can overcome the negatives that threaten to destabilize our life. Thanks for sharing this nice poem.

Multiple factors are there to manoeuvre our thinking- negative or positive. But, with hope, faith, self confidence and committed efforts adverse circumstances can be turned around, I think so. Thanks for sharing it, Richard.

Perfect! Just perfect!

last two lines poetic stroke/nice piece