Thursday, January 22, 2009

Things Just Aint The Same Here Comments

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things just aint the same here
nothin's like it used to be
been forty years since I was happy
since I've seen a bird or tree
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Florence P. Wordsmith
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Patti Masterman 29 January 2009

This time I was ready for your tricks. Oh wait- did you say, what - Mars? I just love these poems. I'm hooked now. You are such a talented weaver of tales.

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Jim Norausky 22 January 2009

Florence, This is a very clever poem delivered in a whimsical way but packs a heavy message about the future of humanity. Very nice. Jim

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