I have two legs
they are good enough to walk
The people, who loves me, know too,
I can walk miles together
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'You have to clear yourself the roads' I agree with the poet. It's nice piece of confidence to ailing heart Ten. dr. sakti
you explain philosophy in practical terms. simply superb. marvelous.
very great write....as i am reading i forgot the dialog was written by same person..as if i am listening to some poetic conversation between you and the sea and begun to think both sides...then i realized it's your piece talking..you successfully delivered great thoughts to us about the reality of life...to gain courage on our everyday life... which is better to fly or to walk? whatever we will do...we cant escape from hindrances and trials...the road is not safe so with the sky....very true to what is happening now... but we have to go on....fight on what is right.... i love this write and love to read it again and again....amusing and thoughts provoking....10++++ and my vote....
Even we dreamed to fly, , But we must kept walk in the earth, , face all, , wow, , very interesting.. Love it so much, , Naru Kaede, , (^_^)
In this poem the way you have described your feelings in such an imaginative manner is really nice.
good poem with strong imagination...you're too imaginary but i want to be like that tooooooooooooo
Where ever we go thoughts go and obstacles have to be overcome. Sarwar, it's a very intense and insightful poem, it even has a childlike simpicity.10 Mamta
a sweet insightful write... walk or fly, challenges in life are meant to be overcome...the poem end brought a smile in me unknowingly...10/10, Sarwar...
'my thoughts have been flying since childhood'.... beautiful image.....i love this poem
Do the this wich are not harmful to anybody..... to fill the joy in thr mind....whoever we relates...or not...
Things I have to do how very true! the emotional turmoil is captured and protrayed in a very lucid manner.
Keep going, let love be infront and behind and in every dirrection Love duncan X
To write poems is all what in your mind and heart... carry on writting poems
Nice poem! ! ...Attractive title too! ! Thanks for sharing. Merna.