Saturday, June 21, 2008

Things, I Have To Do Comments

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I have two legs
they are good enough to walk
The people, who loves me, know too,
I can walk miles together
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sarwar chowdhury
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Merna Ibrahim 16 September 2009

Nice poem! ! ...Attractive title too! ! Thanks for sharing. Merna.

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'You have to clear yourself the roads' I agree with the poet. It's nice piece of confidence to ailing heart Ten. dr. sakti

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Mubeen Sadhika 20 August 2009

you explain philosophy in practical terms. simply superb. marvelous.

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Miriam Maia Padua 17 December 2008

very great write....as i am reading i forgot the dialog was written by same person..as if i am listening to some poetic conversation between you and the sea and begun to think both sides...then i realized it's your piece talking..you successfully delivered great thoughts to us about the reality of life...to gain courage on our everyday life... which is better to fly or to walk? whatever we will do...we cant escape from hindrances and trials...the road is not safe so with the sky....very true to what is happening now... but we have to go on....fight on what is right.... i love this write and love to read it again and again....amusing and thoughts provoking....10++++ and my vote....

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Naru Kaede 28 November 2008

Even we dreamed to fly, , But we must kept walk in the earth, , face all, , wow, , very interesting.. Love it so much, , Naru Kaede, , (^_^)

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Reshma Ramesh 13 November 2008

wow! ! what great thoughts.................well penned

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Sumita Datta 17 October 2008

Very clear thought...

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rohit sapra 29 September 2008

In this poem the way you have described your feelings in such an imaginative manner is really nice.

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Anna jonson 26 September 2008

good poem with strong imagination...you're too imaginary but i want to be like that tooooooooooooo

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Mehmet YILMAZLAR 27 August 2008

this is diffrent ones i read here

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Mamta Agarwal 23 August 2008

Where ever we go thoughts go and obstacles have to be overcome. Sarwar, it's a very intense and insightful poem, it even has a childlike simpicity.10 Mamta

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Kesav Easwaran 16 August 2008

a sweet insightful write... walk or fly, challenges in life are meant to be overcome...the poem end brought a smile in me unknowingly...10/10, Sarwar...

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Wanelisa Albert 27 July 2008

'my thoughts have been flying since childhood'.... beautiful image.....i love this poem

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Samanwaya Njaaneya 03 July 2008

Do the this wich are not harmful to anybody..... to fill the joy in thr mind....whoever we relates...or not...

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Chitra - 29 June 2008

Things I have to do how very true! the emotional turmoil is captured and protrayed in a very lucid manner.

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Seema Chowdhury 27 June 2008

nice poem. keep composing. good luck and take care

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Duncan Wyllie 26 June 2008

Keep going, let love be infront and behind and in every dirrection Love duncan X

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Farhana Abdullah 22 June 2008

To write poems is all what in your mind and heart... carry on writting poems

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Sarwar Chowdhury 21 June 2008

thnx Yoonoos Peerbocus

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sarwar chowdhury

sarwar chowdhury

Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.
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