Saturday, March 3, 2012

Things I Can Change Comments

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a lot of things i can change...
the coffee filter,
the trash bag, the razor
on the sink.
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Eric Cockrell
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Elena Sandu 04 March 2012

Great write! True! With a pinch of fun this poem I fee it showed us how we could change mostly anything in our life but time and made us wonder If death decide to knock at our door all those efforts, what could be for? what is there any use in fight?

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Kaia Grønnbæck 03 March 2012

Would love to know the story behind this poem: -)

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Dave Walker 03 March 2012

I'd sometimes love to be able to change the hands on the clock and stop time for a while. A great poem.

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