Saturday, October 12, 2019

Things Change, Not Yet Still Comments

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Naught but a prison does it change,
A parrot struggles, cage to change.
And in a daunting long journey,
How many still manage to change?
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Aniruddha Pathak 13 October 2019

Thanks, poet Anjandev Roy

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Anjandev Roy 13 October 2019

Same is the play, same stage......fine piece.Thank u. anjandev roy.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 October 2019

It's hard in a crowd to spot you....I identify this line as the kernel of this wonderful Ghazal sir! Beautifully penned....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 October 2019

I've seen Ghazals in Urdu, Punjabi, Hindi, and Gujarati. But do not know of in other languages in India. You might tell me about Orea, Dr Swain. And thanks for appreciating this one.

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Aniruddha Pathak 13 October 2019

Thanks dear Dr swain, for the good words, and you've picked up the right line

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