Monday, February 6, 2017

Thin Line Between Love And Hate Comments

Rating: 5.0

A rope in hand he made his way,
To the midst of the forest around his thoughts,
A step and a stop as he unfolded inside;
Crumbling with the lies he told his mind.
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Renee Wangwe
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Daniel Jones 11 April 2017

incredibly well written and powerful imagery, what heartache and sad feel between each line, but with great rhythm and pace to keep me hooked until the end, fantatsic!

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Saadat Tahir 08 February 2017

amazing....well thought out and deeply symbolic lines... great work dear poet well structured and well planned lines... they force one to wander in the jungle where his mind resides... liked

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