A rope in hand he made his way,
To the midst of the forest around his thoughts,
A step and a stop as he unfolded inside;
Crumbling with the lies he told his mind.
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amazing....well thought out and deeply symbolic lines... great work dear poet well structured and well planned lines... they force one to wander in the jungle where his mind resides... liked
incredibly well written and powerful imagery, what heartache and sad feel between each line, but with great rhythm and pace to keep me hooked until the end, fantatsic!