Thin is in, thin is in
Bodies like paper, thin as fin
Thin as pencil, anemic skin
Portfolio of ribs, crying within
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I like thin models, , , , , , , , , the observation and the freshness of thought is excellent, , modern and crisp, , a 10 from me
Thank you for this poem.....We can't all be a size o or 21 :) what good news! ! ! At 50 and I still fit on size 30 hipster jeans and able to care for my family: I am BLESSED! !
Reshma, that's great! An excellent message - I can see voluptuous women in my mind, and I'd like to see them in the magazines... (A funny thing, I am thin by nature, and I wish I were voluptuous!) Deb
Hello Reshma. I loved this poem and the strong message and warning, the concern and senstiviyt in your writing. Good insight and good read. Loyd, sp
Agreed. It's a disgrace and should be barred. Future generations will shake their heads but that won't help this lot. Keep it up. Tom
Beautiful one. This is one of the best satires that I have come across in a poem.
nice piece of work.... i think this must b published in all Fashion magzaines..
nice of flow of verses..and advocate to the models..great write.. Ency Bearis
Hi I like the flow of your words. sad piece though. Very beautiful my sista
nice poem, to read with a message, poetry always keep its face with our daily life Bowl of fruits to plum the lips Longing for tasty fish and chips Bowl of nothing to slim the hips The show is killing them, tidy tips
This is s meesage to the lots who starve for fame who pput their lives in danger for money n for those mothers who try to bring up their children into the fashion world regardless of the dangerous trend which put many models into the mouth of death
Excellant feeling. Very good theme. But it is just good report for me, not a poem.
Thin is in, thin is in.... Bodies like paper, thin as fin Thin is sin, Lady in size zero Can't a voluptuous woman be our champ? Oh why? Don't healthy curves fit the ramp? ..... //..... It is heartening to note that you have hit hard on those issues which have a bearing on the thoughts of young boys and girls and can adversely affect them. Thanks.