Thin Air Comments

I have seen a lot of those in death with a smile on their face. It reminds me again how what I think I understand, I am incapable of understanding, and in what I think is beyond me, I sense a distinct knowing.

A fantastic poem, like it.

Brilliant Smoky, very well penned.

beautifully put. There is an air of surrealism laced with wonderful imagination....saved within my favourites...I watched the documentary on felix baumgartner who parachuted 128.100 feet tonight and sat in total awe, this stroked the same brow...tyvm karen

Good poem Smoky. I'm not keen on flying - I reckon if we were mean't to, we'd have been born with wings!

This is Doooooooooooopppppppppppppppeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! ! ! ! ! Keep up the good work! ! Write your soul out!