Thin Air Comments

I wonder if it is something you've really experienced or if it's from your imagination, : )

This contains NO rhyming (i THINK) , NO alliterations (i THINK) , it's not acrostic, nor a limerick, BUT.....I love it. Good advice. I wonder if it is something you've really experienced

Wow, this is a preety good poem

Congrats on POD! I hear Bonnie Raitt singing this (I can't make you love me) . You captured the pain of love beautifully (ironic)

2. Beautifully crafted.. "Now I will keep my distance/ And disappear into thin air"…

Congratulations, Dear poet. This beautiful poem is the POEM OF THE DAY-MEMBERS today. Well done