Saturday, August 27, 2016

Thieves In The Night. Comments

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Behind the darkness, light awaits,
dispelling night or gloom;
and thieves escape one's notice,
of the damaged, tampered room.
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dave lessard
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Lorraine Colon 29 August 2016

Your poem accurately describes the actions of thieves who do their dirty work under the cover of darkness. Because of them, we need to sleep with lights burning all night, and bars on our windows and doors. They surely don't deserve such a good poem, but well done, Dave.

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