Monday, October 27, 2008

'Thief Of Smiles' Comments

Rating: 5.0

There was a young boy who was very sad
asked God that he be granted just one wish he prayed.
That if he could, and he really would
steal childrens faces smiles, that they'd made.
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Linda Winchell
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Barnabas Michael 08 March 2014

Wow... This is big beautifull, story-wise

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David Threadgold 27 October 2008

Sounds very Peter Pan in the imagination stakes Linda. and with a happy ending. well done 10/10 Regards Dave T

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Joseph Poewhit 27 October 2008

WOW - that is some imagination of poetry - BRAVO

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Linda Winchell

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