Thursday, June 25, 2009

Thief Comments

Rating: 5.0

I've been known to have alot of grief,
The one thing that bothers me most is to be called by thief,
I make alot of mistakes,
Its like I'm playing baseball and haven't even got to first base,
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jolene garcia
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Eyan Desir 29 June 2009

Awww, sorry you keep writing

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Poetic Soul 25 June 2009

Nice poem u've got, love the structure.

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Nooruddeen Mm 25 June 2009

I enjoyed the poem Well done Nooruddeen

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