Wednesday, October 1, 2008

Thief Comments

Rating: 4.5

You should have never taken
something that belonged to me.
The item can't be replaced,
can't be found in a store.
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Jay Allen
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Ron Flowers 13 May 2009

This is a fine poem. Unless I am mistaken there is some hidden meaning here that I can identify with. I hope to see more of your work. Ron

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great symbolism you have..truly intricate yet superb..well done

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