Monday, July 16, 2018

They Watched The Dawn. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Snow flakes gently floated down
Covering the pock marked
Trench dug ground
With a soft velvety white
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Tom Allport
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Valsa George 20 August 2018

It is unfortunate that man remains man's greatest foe.! How many innocents are killed through rivalry of one sort or the other. It is always a night mare for people to go back to war torn areas where missiles fly and cannons roar! A frightening picture of the brutality of war! A 10

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Lodigiana Poetess 17 July 2018

A poignant reminder of the reality of war- stripped of theatre and facing the cold hard truth of battle. So many young men..lost.A timely reminder as we approach the Centenary of the end of the Great War.. Well constructed and thoughtfully composed+++10. Lodigiana

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