Tuesday, May 24, 2016

They Walk The Lone Path ! ! ! ! Comments

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Those who are always confident of self
Those who keep their eye on the target
Those who know how to fight and how to die
They walk the lone path holding their head high.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Edward Kofi Louis 07 June 2016

They make dreams come true! ! Lovely piece of work.

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Spock The Vegan 29 May 2016

Those who know how to fight and how to die They walk the lone path holding their head high. As a former soldier, this is appreciated. Thanks...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 May 2016

Having self confidence while walking the lone path with courage and raising head high is absolutely appreciated in this poem. Very amazing drafting shared.10

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Darren Jkoeryo 24 May 2016

Courage is enough to take u thru. Nice message man.10

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Mihaela Pirjol 24 May 2016

Indeed, a really inspirational and motivational poem. The repetition of the last verse in each stanza, creates an aesthetic cadence, as well a kind of mantra. Love it!

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Very optimistic, honestly speaking truth from heart, sincere thanks for this share

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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