They Traveled With The Biggie Circus Comments

This is real life poetry with a sprinkling of cynicism. I LOVE IT TOO MUCH! Keep them coming Frankie.

made awkward attempts to get Closer to her sorrow...............i came close to laughing at these lines the SECOND time i read them. i didn't have time to consider laughing the first time around, as the story was so captivating. no lie! i wonder what line Mandolyn thought was missing. hmmm? i agree that the ending is likeable. : 0 i am resisting, but failing to resist the temptation to add this one as well to MyPoemList. thanks for sharing. :) bri