They Touch Comments

they touch, not deep enough to feel... Lovely poem... Colin J...

There is so much bad poetry on here - but finally I have clicked on one that isn't written in a cringeworthy and personal style... So many poems submitted don't have any form, or think form is putting odd punctuation into their poems. This poem has good form, breaking the rules a little for the better. And the punctuation and verse structure makes it sound melancholy. I like it very much. Keep up the good work.

Gorgeous. Very sad. But still wonderful. ~Linley~