They Tell Me My Future Is Shining Comments

There are some fine lines, and a feeling of profundity here, Amberlee, you've tapped into archetypes. And I think the last line works well.

this poem is a 10+++, very well done! HBH

Stunning, Amberlee, simply stunning. Warm regards, Seán

Yes...like everyone else Amberlee, but light-years ahead in perception. Kenneth

astounding, simply amazing!