Monday, October 6, 2008

They Tell Me Comments

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People tell me I should care
About whether I live or die
They make feel bad inside
They make me want to cry
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Brie Carter
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Tanya Stanford 06 October 2008

Trust me when I say things will get better. Most of us have felt exactly the same at some time in our lives. I felt the same for many years. Then I had my kids and I promise you, when you get to experince that feeling you will wonder why you ever felt this way. The poem is heartbreaking and I know the reader felt a sense of pain and sadness. Well done, I'm sure that was the point.

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