Thursday, April 5, 2007

They Say We Must Fight To Keep Our Freedom Comments

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when you come
with a knife
I wish to be killed
you kicked, and left for ever
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Thampi KEE
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Kanav Justa 06 December 2013

, , , woww, , , this is a great write, , , , , , , , loved it, , ,

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rago rago 20 April 2009

a beautiful write.......and just in brief. Good expression.

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premji premji 12 July 2008

So you know the key of freedom! good write...

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Malini Kadir 31 March 2008

A very beautiful poetry! peace......with non violence Or gentle victory with no weapons...strong imagery! lovely work!

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Marvin Brato 26 July 2007

In our country we once overthrown a dictator with a red rose and a rosary against cannon and tanks, and obtained our vctory. We can win freedom without bloodshed! Thanks for sharing.10 for it.

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Gregory Collins 26 June 2007

does a pale rose cry love or shake petals from the lover

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Sandra Fowler 19 April 2007

Very deep feelings expressed here. The line about the pale rose is especially poignant. Fine work, Thampi. Kindest regards, Sandra

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