when you come
with a knife
I wish to be killed
you kicked, and left for ever
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A very beautiful poetry! peace......with non violence Or gentle victory with no weapons...strong imagery! lovely work!
In our country we once overthrown a dictator with a red rose and a rosary against cannon and tanks, and obtained our vctory. We can win freedom without bloodshed! Thanks for sharing.10 for it.
Very deep feelings expressed here. The line about the pale rose is especially poignant. Fine work, Thampi. Kindest regards, Sandra
, , , woww, , , this is a great write, , , , , , , , loved it, , ,