Monday, June 14, 2021

They Say Life Is ~ Comments

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They say ~ life is beautiful
And I say it is like the spider's web
Each part of our body demands
And we spread our desires
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M. Asim Nehal
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Susan Williams 17 June 2021

Life is worth living And I say it is so worth living for dyeing In three stages, painting the world Then trying to rub it off---------------------that is awesome writing

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Poetic Sky 16 June 2021

Thoughtful poem...They say ~ life is beautiful

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Profound and insightful, Asim ji......100%

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KAVIN CHARALAN 15 June 2021

Life's philosophy well said

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Indira Renganathan 15 June 2021

An honest thought and write on life...I totally agree with your views...5*****

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Darren Jkoeryo 15 June 2021

DJ liked your philosophical poem on life. Full points.

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Tihama Frank 15 June 2021

A descriptive poem on life, a trail of life towards death, a complete journey

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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