Friday, October 3, 2008

They Say Dreams Never Do Come True. Comments

Rating: 4.6

They say dreams never do come true..
But they are wrong, I say they do
I dream of violence, I dream of hurt
I dream of children, they live in dirt
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Sylvi Hart
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Bhawani Dheer 09 August 2018

So nice poem I got 1st prize

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Patricia Farwell 18 February 2014

not all dreams are nice and sweet and comfortable- .anymore. than life is

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Akanksha Bhatt 01 October 2012

amazing really amazing.! . this is a great poem by a great poet! thumbs up! :)

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Ari Ryan 28 January 2011

That was great. Very deep and full of emotion. I could really feel where you were coming from, :)

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Shanyn Austin 06 February 2010

that was really good... thumbs up! :)

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Keva M. 23 October 2009

... :) great! what you have wrote is now coming into reality..just look into this world...

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=Donna Oliver 23 August 2009

Touching, powerful... you know how to write a poem.

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Mandy S 05 June 2009

Hey Sylvia. Great poem :) Really powerful. Good job & Thumbs up

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Italo Etkin 09 October 2008

this is really a fantastic poem. great job with this

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Anonymous *plz comment! * 03 October 2008

wow i love this poem, its great and strong

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Sylvi Hart

Sylvi Hart

Peterborough, ON
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