They Said Goodbye Comments

Mary... simply stunning. A perfect piece. t x

Bautiful how you have captured the moment, the time of a child and the end of a season. well done.

Oh Mary, to have noticed that! What a lovely poem, what a lovely person..

Wonderfull Mary, great use of language and so very descriptive, the reader is so easily able to see the changes in the seasons, the children on thier bikes, the waterlillies, the whole poem flows with that of a pure poets mind. i have read much of your rhyming poems, and this is just as good you manage to master all forms of yours that i have read. great work Robin

Very seldom have I seen such empathy shown towards their Children, Mary this is AMAZING, I love it from start to end What a great writer you are Love duncan X